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Creative Writing : Neverending poem
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From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1  (Original Message)Sent: 5/27/2004 8:19 AM
My friend and I used to play at this .... she'd make a line.... I'd make a rhyme ..... we'd keep it in time .... and trade all the time ....
 
Ill start with a line....
 
some one else make a rhyme
and then make a line
 
for the next one to rhyme
then deposit a line
 
get it?
.. we used to do it on paper sitting near each other passing back n forth.. in this venue we may want to make rhyme.... with a few lines.... or more ... just remeber to leave a line at the end ... (and it doesnt have to rhyme with lime) .... it can be anything ....
 
one catch .... you have to pick the person who goes next .... keep in mind those of us who visit here a lot .... set them up with a line, so to speak ..... it could be fun.
 
 
The Beggining of the Neverending Poem
 
 
It starts with a thought (Starry)
 


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 Message 201 of 215 in Discussion 
From: STARSent: 11/19/2007 10:08 PM
lol   Suspected dual identity of a former member;  'both' gone.

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 Message 202 of 215 in Discussion 
From: peejaySent: 11/20/2007 1:01 AM
I thought I recognized the name, but couldn't remember who it was, or them.
 
 
cute poem Star.
 
 
was another person... hidden
identity a facade
 
 

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From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1Sent: 9/26/2008 5:09 AM
to effect that 'All Is Broken'
was another person... hidden
 
and in comes a breeze
that knocks the dust to its knees
and the window opens wide
to let the light back inside
shine my firends, shine!
Let the pleasure be mine!

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From: STARSent: 9/26/2008 12:29 PM
shine my firends, shine!
Let the pleasure be mine!
 
I don't wanna fight ya; bruise, scratch or bite ya
but I insist  that the pleasure's all mine, suh

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From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1Sent: 9/27/2008 2:12 AM
I don't wanna fight ya; bruise, scratch or bite ya
but I insist  that the pleasure's all mine, suh
 
Take what you need
my urge is to feed
drink up my words
for they long to be heard
 

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 Message 206 of 215 in Discussion 
From: STARSent: 9/27/2008 12:07 PM
drink up my words
for they long to be heard
 
wether in prose or in rhyme
to give and to take, it's pleasure time

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 Message 207 of 215 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1Sent: 10/12/2008 10:48 PM
wether in prose or in rhyme
to give and to take, it's pleasure time
 
write what you feel
so your mind i can steal
 

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From: STARSent: 10/12/2008 11:17 PM
write what you feel
so your mind i can steal
 
Uh uhhhh, my mind only feels
if it owns what's real

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From: MSN NicknameJust_Jess_tooSent: 10/13/2008 2:01 AM
Uh uhhhh, my mind only feels
if it owns what's real
 
let your mind be at ease
take the words that you please
 
make them say what you mean
like a sprout from a bean

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From: STARSent: 10/13/2008 6:07 PM
make them say what you mean
like a sprout from a bean

?????????!!  

 

At first sight I laughingly screamed

then...  fully realized what that means

 



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From: MSN NicknameJust_Jess_tooSent: 10/13/2008 8:18 PM

At first sight I laughingly screamed

then...  fully realized what that means

 

She laughed at the thought?

Oh NO! She did not...........


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From: STARSent: 10/13/2008 9:14 PM

She laughed at the thought?

Oh NO! She did not...........

 

Yes, she did so! ....at the visual

of a bean sprout thought curlique-io


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From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1Sent: 10/26/2008 3:54 AM

Yes, she did so! ....at the visual

of a bean sprout thought curlique-io

 

But the moment had passed

so the thought had been stashed


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From: STARSent: 10/26/2008 11:46 AM

But the moment had passed

so the thought had been stashed

 

and she was quick to say

"self, don't be so rash"


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From: MSN Nickname-Heart-Of-Steel-1Sent: 11/9/2008 4:37 AM

and she was quick to say

"self, don't be so rash"

 

Just gird up your loins

and make a mad dash


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