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You looked like you were sleeping,as I stooped to kiss your brow.
I thought I saw your mouth move,and any minute now,
you'd sit up and you'd talk to me,just like you always did.
Just a trick of light though,Farewell to you I bid.
Now a deadly silence creeps around the room,
where once golden sunlight,now just a cold ,dark,gloom.
The vacantness surrounds me,a numbness to the bone,
A feeling so apparent,that I am on my own.
Your standing there in spirit,my mind it reaches out,
I know you would not leave me,of that I have no doubt.
But things are not the same now,I feel like I'm alone,
Standing in a house that no longer feels like home.
If I could have just one wish,you'd be standing by my side,
my shoes would not be soaked,
through tears that I have cried.
Another trick of light as I though I saw you blink,
just to say goodbye,it's harder than you think.
The days will come and go,another year,another season,
it's hard to grasp the fact,things happen for a reason.
As I travel through this life,things seem so unfair,
Whilst out walking through a crowd,I see you everywhere.
Reality like water,trickles through my mind,
you were to me my best friend,considerate,and kind.
I just will not forget you,not in a million years,
for now I'll try to dry my eyes,to stop the floods of tears.
For all our golden memories,I'll lock in my heart and treasure,
For all those years I'v known you,Godbless,it was a pleasure.
Love Brandy xx |
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Hi Brandy That was just beautiful hun. Keep up the good work  Love Nova xxxxxxxxxxxx  |
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Thank you Brandy, that was truly lovely Love Erika xxxxxxxxx |
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Many thanks for that Brandy, it was truly beautiful. Polly xxxxxxxxxxxx |
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Oh Brandy that is so lovely and I really agree with BlueBell it brought back all the stuff about my mum and my ex Peter. Peter regularly comes through mediums at the spiritualist church to me and he, in life, wrote me many lovely poems which I really regret having destroyed when he left me. We were only separated for a few months when he died. love and light Linda xx |
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GOD BLESS YOU ALL.
And thank you for you'r kind comments.
I do write from my heart ,like blue says ,you have to have felt it to write it.
I think theres a poet in all of us,its good to release the feelings onto paper (an outlet for the soul).love you all. best wishes ,Brandy xxxxxx |
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