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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpirit  (Original Message)Sent: 11/15/2006 2:50 PM
I emerge from the rubble of discarded memories
of times where hope existed
dreams were alive
I am alone on a street to where I don't know
I ask but am ignored
people look through me
they pass by locked in their own bubble
is that where I am?
why did you not tell me before now
I could have planned
I could have made a map
but you never told me what to expect.
no directions given
trust and go with the flow
great advice guys
now what do I do?
Do you have something to say now?
any little crumb of encouragement
why are you walking away
you leave me alone again
what did I say
hey there is a door here
Do I open it!
 
alone
drifting
the door opened
I am in a new place
no one gave me a map
but light shines ahead
may be someone will see me now.
 
Cara Nov 2006
 


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/15/2006 6:56 PM
A super write, Cara....how one feels when alone in an emotional wilderness without guidance, yet I love that you opened that door, for unless we do...we stagnate where we are.
 
An optimistic approach to the isolation we can sometimes feel, nice one again, Cara,  Zy
 
PS...heehee...the challenge is 'Where is?' (I think) .....but I am delighted with what you have written under my title of my piece, lol...forgive the pun, but, you give it greater 'direction'

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/16/2006 4:34 AM
This is great tee hee!  Where is it?  Who knows?

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 11/16/2006 9:36 AM
oooooooooooooops
oh well guess that was what I needed to write at the time LOL!
 
hugs
Cara

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