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Past Challenge : Cara's Challenge; A Lesson Learned
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 2/3/2007 12:43 AM
They said that he would love me...
and I believed them for a while,
but a sea of sadness
soon ~ wiped out my smile.
So many times I asked of him
please ~ take me if you will
and his refusal to comply with me
was a very bitter ~ pill.
They said that he had died for me
and I swore I'd do the same,
but he left me here to fight alone
with Nigger as my name.
The strength that reinforced in me
was priceless to my task,
so the myth ~ was maybe ~ there
saying, "Do, don't hope nor ask" 
 
 
(c) ZYDHA HART 2007
 
 
Sorry, Folks, I don't open this door very often, but it is open tonight
 
 
 


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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 2/3/2007 2:33 PM
I know He truly loves me,
for I had been so lost.
Names are just the labels,
we give ourselves at what cost?
I have been a drunkard,
living on the street.
I am also mentally ill,
my own hatred I now defeat.
We are His wondrous rainbow,
a palette of color to behold.
He does not see the outside,
but looks within our soul.
We all put up a stronghold,
to protect the inner child.
The door to Him is always locked,
but He sees thru our guile.
I am far from perfect,
but I cried unto Him come in,
His grace is sufficient; He died for my sins.
 
Dixie Lynn 2/3/07
 

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/3/2007 6:05 PM
It is good that he is there for
those who need a helping hand
but he cannot do it all and so
leaves some to understand
that they must be their councel
for their problem is for life
and time will teach then how
to deal with bigotted strife.
I leave him to the others
for now I'm fully grown
and when it's time for meeting,
I'll have got there ~ on my own.

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 2/3/2007 9:17 PM
powrful dear Zy

hurt-filled

triumph - driven

open every door
i wish to see thee
defeat me nevermore
my strength will never leave me
fight on!

best,
m

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/4/2007 12:52 AM
Indeed, My Friend...to be one's own counsel means that
one learnes more about 'self' and how to take care of it.
 
Life is rather like having a baby, lol, it doesn't come with a hand book
and anyways, every book would be so different.
 
Thanks Mikhail, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameAnxiousUnruly2ndSent: 2/12/2007 2:24 PM
Hi Zy
 
He said that he would love me
But I never heard a word,
I thought,
The way my life had gone
How that now seems absurd.
For I strained to hear an echo,
Maybe
Hear the second time around
But
Again the world was silent
As I
Crawled
Along the ground
But then in a moment of inspiration
A thought to me occured
It doesn't mean
It can't be true
Just because
I never heard!
We try to live correctly
While others
Hurt us so out off hand
But
I know when I sit besides him
Only
Then
Will I understand
For those who strayed from his path
Those who
So easily fell
Will not feel his warmeth or his love
Just the heat from hell
 
XXXX Jools
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/13/2007 11:30 PM
I have missed the jewels studded around, Jools,
 
thanks...we so often think as one, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 2/14/2007 6:01 PM
Beautiful Julie!

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 2/18/2007 2:31 AM

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