Oh dear, Jimmy, far from it, you have done a great villanelle, using a genre which is difficult to maintain with the restrains of the villanelle, but I thank you kindly, Sir, for such a lovely reply.
This, the Pallindrome and the Sonnet are the three formats which I found most engrossing and most difficult...but also most satisfying when completed, lol, and ...I do write some very dark stuff too, lol, but these chosen rhymes just went in this direction. Thanks for helping to keep challenges going, maybe we should choose an easier format so others won't be daunted, this is not one of those, lol, Zy
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