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New Poems Pge 3 : Havana
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 4/12/2005 12:47 PM
 
Havana
 
The old man hands out his walnut hand
"Cigar" he calls "You understand?"
"Dollar?" he holds a few pesos
and shrugs his shoulders on he goes.
 
The sun beats down relentless streets
Men stand in doorways shouting greets
" Hola Amigo" You wanna Rum?
But you walk on into the midday sun.
 
The big old cars they cruise along
their fins and wings they sparkle on
inside they are a thing of faith
held together in all but space.
 
The music dances down the streets
and filters down its salsa beats.
You order mojitos and find a seat
and lose yourself into the heat.
 
The tall dark girl she looks your way
a dusky stranger of the day
she takes your hand and makes you walk
the steps of samba, rhumba talk
 
you cha cha, spin and glide the floor
she smiles and leaves you wanting more
She shrugs her shoulders hits the bar
Your good but not that good  in Havana.
 
Dalquiri in the Floridita
beside Ernesto feeling weaker
you cool in side the Capitol
and watch the world above it all
 
You took my heart Havana you
stole it on the Malecon
you made chase your winding streets
in the fading of the sun.
 
Someday I'll sit upon your walls
retrace my steps within the stalls
Call your name out in my sleep
the day I left you I did weep.
 
12/4/2005
 


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/13/2005 9:33 PM
This wonderfully atmospheric read, coupled with you photos of Havana, Mark, make me want to feel what you so obviously did. You write contagiously of your delight to have been there.
 
I did Latin Ballroom in the 60s and I felt the beat of this...hope your going to put this one to music, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameBRBspasskySent: 4/13/2005 11:52 PM
wonderful poem, Mark. Loved it
and of course, envious as hell.
 
Steve kicking the snow off his shoes Spassky