The confusion of turbulant emotions is well described here, Toni, and I like the way your piece has an optimistic ending...

 

I love this Toni, a little winner this poem, I love the way you use the colours to express feelings.

 

Emma

Hehe, I love this one too! Its funny how I've read most of these before, and yet they're only sinking into my little head when I read them on my own lol.  Thats how it is with me most of the time though, poetry has a whole new meaning when I read it on my own.

 

Lv, Em

Hiya Zy, thank you, I agree, the only way we can survive in life is to be optimistic.
Thank you Emma, I'm glad you liked it so much and that you apprecaited my use of colours
Hiya Em, I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, and I am the same I have to read things by myself to gain their full affect.

Thank you all for your kind comments