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| | From:  Zydha (Original Message) | Sent: 4/14/2005 5:50 PM |
Hy Poets, I posted something I found with reference to the Tanka format in Challenge and Poetry Workshop I'm still trying to get the hang of them with help from Clive, but although there is a recognised syllable count, it does not appear to be essential, as long as it's five lines within 31 syllables GREY DAYS ~~~ In shaded sadness Infinite wonderings Fall relentlessly Umbrellas miss the rain though Tomorrow will be brighter ~~~ (c) ZYDHA HART 2005 |
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Hi Zy, I was just replying to this when it disappeared lol. I think you are definitely getting the hang of these tankas especially liked 'umbrellas miss the rain though' - but I think you just added though after I read this the first time lol Emma |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 4/14/2005 6:04 PM |
Hahaha....you have to be fast to catch the practice runs, Emma, lol Thanks, I am trying and it's lb's challenge. I'd just been looking at the challenges and I thought of a way to improve and popped back here to change this one too, lol, I also just like confusing you, Zy |
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