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New Poems Pge 3 : Lilacs
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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893  (Original Message)Sent: 4/14/2005 9:42 PM

Can you put lilacs on a grave,

and watch as sorrowed hands

throw their first fist of

dry and cold flaked earth.

Some would throw a rose

with its strong scarlet bloom;

a memory of lost passions

in a tumultuous memory.

Throw lilacs, for if there scent

means nothing to you,

will it bother you as to

which grave they enhance?

They are the flower

of perhaps, indifferent muse,

they may not evoke past passions

or even great derring do.

Yet in your honest hour,

what else will disguise

the lonely scent of death.



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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/15/2005 4:55 AM
I so like what you have built around the 'scent' of lilacs here, Emma, such an emotive poem. I felt a sadness simply reading this. It 'is' such a haunting sound, to hear that first handful of soil, but I found these two lines holding me...
 

They are the flower

of perhaps, indifferent muse,

A poem with concealed depth, I think, well writen, Emma, Zy


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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/15/2005 4:41 PM
Thanks Zy, I sometimes feel that there is such finality with death - and the customs that use to say goodbye to loved ones - and flowers and scents are so much a part of life and love.
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameBRBspasskySent: 4/16/2005 12:17 PM
fine poem, you've hit good form again! I find this poem as intriquing as lilacs.
 
Steve

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/16/2005 4:56 PM
Thanks Steve - a bit of a morbid one though - glad you liked
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/17/2005 10:11 AM
Thanks Julie, It is strange when you think about it - yet flowers seem to signify so much from birth to death.  I must listen to that song.
 
Emma

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