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New Poems Pge 3 : Walking Wolves
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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893  (Original Message)Sent: 4/19/2005 8:57 AM
And once I walked with wolves

Through moonlit ghost lined woods

Where whipping branches

Scratched my eyes

Tore fragments from my cotton dress

To leave as ribbons

Blowing free

A trace, a mark

To follow me

And reaching down I felt the fur

Smelt the stench of fear

As death was stalking

Walking near

And then I ran

Flying feet, a pounding beat

As sentry trees

Listened to this

Last retreat

Of walking wolves

And far flung fools

I joined the ghosts of silver dreams

And answered calls

I didn’t mean

Just walking wolves

And talking fools

©EMG05   



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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 4/19/2005 12:33 PM
A super metaphor Emma, this is one of your best again.
 
I love how graphically you make the reader so aware and even feel your feelings of fear and apprehension of life and it's components. Can't choose a favourite line, I love it all, well written, many will identify, many will have felt the same at some time...I'm sure, Zy

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From: LittleBillSent: 4/19/2005 5:06 PM
This definitely has a surreal quality about it Emma, love the images you create here, well done.
: )lb

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/19/2005 7:03 PM
Thanks Zy, I wasn't too sure what to make of this after I wrote it - just bits of feelings laid out
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/19/2005 7:05 PM
Thanks lb, I did wonder if wolves were a bit cliched, but they just sort of appeared in this - must be all the music I'm listeing to at the moment.
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameBRBspasskySent: 4/19/2005 11:09 PM
nice rhythm to this, Emma, as if in sync with the poems movement told. Enjoyed reading it very much.
 
Steve

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 4/20/2005 7:41 PM
Thanks Steve - its a bit of an odd poem lol. Glad you liked though
 
Emma

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