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| | From:  Zydha (Original Message) | Sent: 4/19/2005 1:10 PM |
Can you hear it That's my heartbeat, The driving motor Of my mind. Plugs and fanbelt Need some cleaning Since the two Are intertwined. What fun to find Discarded wrecks Creat a collage Of body parts. A model new Called Salvador Or Frankenstien From moving arts. (c) ZYDHA HART |
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oooooooooooo !....spooooooky ! someone has been reading Mary Shelly again methinks....or else the cars broken down....lol...interessting poem Zed, reminds me that I could do with a general overhaul myself actually....will I ever pass another MOT ? : )lb |
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nice little shift ( change of gear) after second stanza. I beat you have a Rolls Royce heart  Steve |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 4/19/2005 11:42 PM |
The chassis looks ok from here, lb, lol, but it's whats under the bonnet that counts. Thanks, Zed |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 4/19/2005 11:46 PM |
Hahaha..what a clever reply, Steve and very sweet as well. An Audi TT is what I'd really like, lol, fast little mover, 'night again, Zy x |
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