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New Poems Pge 2 : 'Deadly' in Love
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 9/13/2004 9:56 AM

Serpentined shadows

Against the wall,

Listening pillars

Hear their sighs,

As they dance a waltz

In clothes

Of yesteryear.

.

In reverse turn

A dried and withered

flower falls,

And her hair

Cascades loosely

Into a bouquet

Of silken auburn curls. .

I fell in love

As I watched them

Smile, dance and...kiss.

.

Oh that, that were I

Within her slender arms.

Our eyes met

And I smiled,

But as I watched

They slowly faded

Into the shadows

Of their home.

.

I moved to reach

Out to my fantasy,

But as I slowly moved

Towards the wall,

I heard the sound of

Her dried, dead, flower

Beneath my shoe.

(c) ZYDHA HART  2004

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/13/2004 9:58 AM
Thanks for your reply on last night's version, Emma, but I took it over to the beeb this morning and played with it, and, I think this is improved? Zy

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From: MSN NicknameValerie-JaneSent: 9/13/2004 7:12 PM
I like the movement I feel in this Zy....a hypnotic effect poem.
By the way, forgot to tell you that Jorge would be delighted for you to add his web site on your links page...he will be going on another diving trip to Mexico at the end of this month so hopefully will have more lovely photos to add.
Valerie X

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From: LittleBillSent: 9/13/2004 7:17 PM
I do like this Zed, it creates a nicely spooky atmosphere without trying too hard...well written. : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/13/2004 9:01 PM
Thamks Valerie, it started out for the Fantasy thread, but went into a more ghostly idea.
 
OK, I will look into doing that...I tried to link Fluff's site, but it hasn't worked, so will check it out and find out exactly how to do it. The members will love it. Please thank Jorge for me, Valerie, I think it is really wonderful, Zydha x

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/13/2004 9:04 PM
Glad you like this lb, I think it's one of my better ones recently, thanks, Zed

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/17/2004 12:28 AM
I can't get the link to work for Jorge's site, Valerie, just in case he takes a look at where his link is going, but I will keep trying. It's like Fluff's...I can get it on the page, but it doesn't connect. Have emailed MSN, so awaiting reply. Zy x

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