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The Phoenix Song I sang to the Phoenix last call As flames consumed And our love fell Like sprinkled heaven ~ ~ ~ Oh precious love Savour the kiss Let the tears Heal the wounds Of loves cut And the melody Pound through our Breasts A tumultuous beating We are one In the ashes of our passion ~ ~ ~ And the autumn breeze Shall blow Our starlight dust For we are risen And the Phoenix song Will sing forever ~ ~ ~ EMG04 I know this is a well used theme, and its a highly unoriginal love poem |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 9/15/2004 10:15 AM |
I 'like' how you have used the metaphor of the Pheonix here, Emma, it is one of my favourite idea themes and I have used t several times. It seems when we (you and I) think something old-fashioned or unoriginal in our work, we each enjoy that particular genre written in that way...yet we neither are steadfast traditionalists. I really like this poem...and particularly, the last stanza, Zydha |
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Much as I love the foody Poems Im pleased to see another type of genre from your pen. Great Mark |
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Thanks Zydha, There is something so magical about the phoenix, especially in love poetry - I guess I can be a bit old fashioned at times when writing - but some things just tend to lean that way. Emma |
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Thanks Mark, I felt it was time for a diet - so back to straightforward love lol Emma |
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hi Emma I love the idea of a phoenix rising, great poem love |
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