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New Poems Pge 2 : Empty Hand
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 9/15/2004 10:38 AM
 
The hand that held mine
slipped away
Somewhere
out along the way
The time that passed
has turned to grey
the hairs upon the pillow
 
Silent nights
in long walks filled
contemplating
where the thrills
Seemed to have gone
Deserted waves
on empty beaches
jaded wasps
feast on rotting peaches
by the bench
the walk then reaches
to watch the sun go down
 Playing games of fetch
with mans best friend
wonder was this how
it had to end
Now the leaves begin to fall
Tunes are hard
places barred
too many memories
like a jagged shard
Dont collect
Go straight to Jail
Give me a chance
and get me bail
In the monopoly of love.
Day lights gone
We wonder home
The empty hand
Feels so alone.
This evening.
 
15/9/2004
 


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From: MSN NicknameValerie-JaneSent: 9/15/2004 8:08 PM
You are so good at these kind of 'memory' poems Mark. It feels like you take mind pictures of wherever life has taken you....Valerie X

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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 9/16/2004 11:44 AM
Thanks VJ
I think in essence you caught It, Im an artist more than a writer I paint scenes in my head and then connect them with words, The psychology skills than add the emotions and it seems to be complete.
Mark