Wow! This is absolutely fantastic! I love it... It's so sad and yet there's a profound beauty in between those lines and I could feel every single word! I am really speechless with this, it's just so brilliant.

 

Keep on writing, I love poems like this you know.

 

Lv Fluff.

hi Mark

 

Great economy with lines here and love the rhyming skill!   A poem after my own heart

 

 

luv

Thanks Greta & Fluff This is the second of the twilight poems I'm trying to write simple stuff because I find a lot of my work is too wordy.

Mark

Indeed Mark, not your usual style but has a nice rhyme and rhythm to it, written almost like a tune. Nice one. : )lb

I like this different style, it suits the mood and tune I hear, Mark.

 

I wonder why I seem to hear a musical rhythm in a lot of your work as I read. Zydha