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| From: Zydha (Original Message) | Sent: 9/15/2004 11:05 AM |
Song Whisperers Whispered is the lullaby Melodious of tone Haunting is the gentle sound Heard only when alone. Listen, you will hear �?voices “waking�?in your ear. Shadows wrap you in their arms In warmth of words refined, Blowing coolness to your spirit Feeding comfort to your mind. Listen you will hear - voices “humming�?in your ear. We think of those we care about Despite infrequent moans Of those who are a memory Hear �?hush �?in gentle tones. Listen you will hear - voices “whisper�?in your ear. The sea, the birds �?all sing to us Trees dance in harmony Open up your sleeping eyes A symphony �?you’ll see. Listen, you will hear �?voices “singing�?in your ear. © Zydha Hart 2003 |
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I like the breaks of the whisperes in this between each verse it captures the title perfectly |
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This is beautiful Zy.. The lines between the stanzae add a great affect and I particularly like the last 2 lines of the first verse. Lv Fluff. |
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| | From: potleek | Sent: 9/15/2004 5:16 PM |
Zydha I like this one, it has a nice gentle flow about it...well done...Tony |
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Hi Zydha I was with you all the way in this poem! I love the delivery and the idea. Beautiful poem, well done!! |
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