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New Poems Pge 2 : Song Whisperers (edited)
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 9/15/2004 11:05 AM

Song Whisperers

 

Whispered is the lullaby

Melodious of tone

Haunting is the gentle sound

Heard only when alone.

 

Listen, you will hear �?voices “waking�?in your ear.

 

Shadows wrap you in their arms

In warmth of words refined,

Blowing coolness to your spirit

Feeding comfort to your mind.

 

Listen you will hear - voices “humming�?in your ear.

 

We think of those we care about

Despite infrequent moans

Of those who are a memory

Hear �?hush �?in gentle tones.

 

Listen you will hear - voices “whisper�?in your ear.

 

The sea, the birds �?all sing to us

Trees dance in harmony

Open up your sleeping eyes

A symphony �?you’ll see.

 

Listen, you will hear �?voices “singing�?in your ear.

 

© Zydha Hart 2003



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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 9/15/2004 11:28 AM
I like the breaks of the whisperes in this between each verse it captures the title perfectly

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From: MSN NicknameBouncing_FluffSent: 9/15/2004 4:42 PM
This is beautiful Zy..
 
The lines between the stanzae add a great affect and I particularly like the last 2 lines of the first verse.
 
Lv Fluff.

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From: MSN NicknamepotleekSent: 9/15/2004 5:16 PM
Zydha I like this one, it has a nice gentle flow about it...well done...Tony

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/15/2004 10:09 PM
Thanks, Mark, I tried to give it the gentle build up to imagined soft singing, pleased it worked, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/15/2004 11:11 PM
Thanks, Fluff, I wanted to pace it, and hoped that this layout would work, Luv, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameGretathepoet2Sent: 9/16/2004 10:30 AM
Hi Zydha
 
I was with you all the way in this poem!  I love the delivery and the idea.  Beautiful poem, well done!!

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/16/2004 1:12 PM
Thanks, Greta, it seems to have come over in the way I thought it, lol, that doesn't happen always to me...even I'm not certain if I wrote it with family in mind, but it always makes me think of them, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/16/2004 10:10 PM
Thanks Tony, pleased you enjoyed this, Zydha

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