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New Poems Pge 2 : The Lady with The Mask
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 9/16/2004 1:10 AM
Did she never have a care
Or masquerade with subtle flair,
The Lady with The Mask.
 
In presence numb to all around
Her silence was her only sound
 
With innocence she'd hypnotise,
A mist would camouflage her eyes
Then, someone thought to ask.
 
Who are you, you try to hide,
The woman hidden deep inside,
 
So much you keep of you concealed
We wish to ask that you should yield,
The face that we should know you by.
 
Her mask she dropped without defeat
And rose so both their eyes could meet
 
She smiled and said "Am I not here,
 I fail, to understand your fear,
 If I am me, accept, and ask not...why"
 
 
  (c)  ZYDHA HART  2004
 


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From: MSN NicknameValerie-JaneSent: 9/16/2004 6:08 AM
love this Zy........and your new graphic...you are so clever....you are Zy best ! (said with a french accent)
Valerie X

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/16/2004 8:11 AM
Hi Zydha,
 
I do love the thought behind this poem - the mask that we hide behind  great graphic as well.
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameGretathepoet2Sent: 9/16/2004 10:37 AM
Hi Zydha
 
It's so sttange, but from childhood, I have always had this phobia of masks, even if i know who is behind them!!  Your poem illustrates the irrationality of it all
 
 
love

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/16/2004 1:17 PM
ooohhhww, la la...(also with a french accent! lol) How do you spell oooo
 
Pleased you enjoyed it, Valerie, and my graphic...well...have to keep up with the members, lol. I haven't been able to keep script when posted, must try again, Thanks, Valerie, oh...hope the op went fine yesterday. Zy..
 
Ohh...wait a minute.... there. lol

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From: MSN NicknamewildestscarletsunriseSent: 9/16/2004 6:56 PM
Hi Zy
You write this kind of poem so well.
I like this one a lot.
Mari

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From: LittleBillSent: 9/16/2004 7:52 PM
Interesting lay out Zed...nicely written ( as always)...I don't suppose you mean that legendary quark and cucumber mask you women all wear when the menfolk are at work ?
: )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/16/2004 10:12 PM
Thanks, Emma, I have a thing about masks, they have an invisible layer, (and remind me of Italy). Zydha 

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/16/2004 10:14 PM
Hy Greta, yes, I have known others who don't like masks, I don't mind them cos...I think we wear them more than we know, thanks, Zydha

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/17/2004 9:32 AM
Thanks, Mari, I think we each have a style which is comfortable to us,, I think this is mine...I like double entendre (don't know where the accents are, lol, so imagine Valerie saying  'double entendre' to you, lol).
 
I thought I'd answered you in this, hope you're well, Zydha x

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/17/2004 9:36 AM
hahaha...now we know what your wife uses!!!
 
No, lb, of course not, I'm Scottish...it's egg white and 'porridge' oats! lol. Thanks lb, Zed

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