Haunting & wistful Like the title,

I loved it

Mark

thankyou Mark, for reading and commenting

I do like this Greta - isn't it great when you can finally lay something to rest - the realisation that the pain is not quite as acute as it first was

 

Emma

Hi Emma

 

Yes, that is what I was trying to convey here, glad you like it

 

 

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thankyou very much Mari, for reading and commenting

 

 

Another very good poem Greta, I like the idea of a goodbye without tears, well written. : )lb

thanks Lb, yes, it's a nice place to be but it takes a lot to get there

Nicely said in this short and to the point format, Greta, I like the finality of this, like it really is past tense, Zydha

Hi Zydha

 

 

 

Yes, sometimes economy with words offers the best vehicle for feelings I have found

 

thankyou for reading and commenting

 

 

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