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Synthetic Philanderer. He courted the lonely. A dallying libertine, they warmed to his lascivious smile. He was a wolf, running earnestly panting. Tongue hanging out, salivating over his next chase. She caught a glimpse of his emaciated heart, as he engaged in coquetry with his susceptible prey. He flippantly casts aside the carcasses of his game, as she sees the soul of a synthetic philanderer. ©JT04 |
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Hi Marie......great to see you back on the board. Good poem. : )lb |
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Hi Mari Written with panache and style - this is excellent - you captured the shallow beast so well in this Emma |
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Hi Mari A lovely portrayal of the shallow-hearted fool. best wishes |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 9/16/2004 10:19 PM |
So nice to read you again, Mari, must mail you soon. This is so much in your wonderful graphic style, beast that he is, you coloured him well, Zydha x |
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Hi Mari What a wonderful piece of verse I really liked this one. Mark G |
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Thanks everyone for reading and for your comments. I am pleased that you all enjoyed this poem. Mari |
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