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New Poems Pge 2 : Be My Glue (jazz Song)
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 9/17/2004 11:59 AM
 
 I never wanted the moon in June
I Never cared for it all
I never Wanted to float like a balloon
Or be the beau of the ball
All I wanted was for you to say
That you loved me too
All I wanted was for you to stay
and that would be my glue.
 
I never wanted any diamond rings
Or all the riches you posess
I didnt need all the material things
Your littele heart caressed
All I wanted was for you to say
That you loved me too
All I wanted was for you to stay
and that you'd be my glue
 
Now Im Sitting on the dance room floor
All the guests have been upon
earlier you said you dont want me anymore
and you've upped and gone
All I wanted was for you to say
That you loved me too
All I wanted was for you to stay
and that you'd be my glue
 
(c) 2004 Graysongs
 


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From: LittleBillSent: 9/17/2004 12:19 PM
Indeed Mark, nicely soft and 'jazzy'......can't help thinking that perhaps 'and stick to me like glue'...or maybe...'hold me tight as glue' or something similar may sound better when sung, I know they are cliches but sometimes they work well in songs.
Just a thought. Nice piece of work.
: )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/18/2004 6:57 PM
Smooth, Mark, sort of 'what we need to hold us together' kinda words...another nice slant on life, Zy