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New Poems Pge 2 : Last to Shake
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From: LittleBill  (Original Message)Sent: 9/17/2004 1:03 PM
Let’s talk you and I about
this attraction we both feel
you know it’s not allowed
to touch and then to squeal
out loud with perfect passion
and then to beg for more
may I remind you of the kitchen -
how the lasagne hit the floor ?
We can come to some agreement
perhaps a bartering of flesh
you keep your hands behind your back
and I’ll try not to rip the mesh
of those startling fish black stockings
you like to wear for me these days
and those things we hide in wardrobes
you know they’re just a craze ?
So if you’re happy with my thinking
there’s a pledge that we should take
we’ll close our eyes and count to ten
and the winner is the last to shake.

©lb04


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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 9/17/2004 3:20 PM
This seems more your form than the previous ones and I think I got smile on this one

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From: MSN NicknameValerie-JaneSent: 9/18/2004 3:02 AM
An lb special indeed.......and I hope it was home made lasagne at least and you ate it off the floor after, lol.  Valerie X

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From: LittleBillSent: 9/18/2004 8:36 AM
Thanks Mark, glad I could raise a smile. : )lb

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From: LittleBillSent: 9/18/2004 8:37 AM
Hi VJ, of course darling.....I never eat anything else...but not always off the floor...lol...thanks for reading. : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/18/2004 8:41 AM
Hi lb - of course it begs the question - what do you hide in wardrobes?  More you I think this poem
 
Emma

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From: LittleBillSent: 9/18/2004 9:08 AM
ahhhh Emma, now that would be telling .....thanks for reading. : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/18/2004 7:04 PM
Love it lb, it is full of double entendre, isnt it? yes...is it? Oh it is! lol
 
This is another one of your 'speaking to her' in that 'special low voiced seductive way and...I love it when you do, very much you, Zed

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From: LittleBillSent: 9/19/2004 7:26 AM
Thanks for reading Zed.....good point ! I don't think this would work in a high pitched squeaky voice...lol.. : )lb

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