Hi Valerie,

 

I think lb has finally met his match - this is gorgeous

 

Emma

Well lb, after all that it was me who didn't sleep lol....serves me right.

Thanks so much for your lovely comment. Valerie X

Thanks as ever Emma for your lovely comment.....there is still however a difference in our poems of this genre as lb sees things from a slightly different angle than me....lol.....Valerie X

Mmnnn, Valerie, each of you have your own style in this genre...I so enjoyed this, but for a moment, I thought it was advanced pregnancy and had to read it again when I read the replies...oh dear...sensual it is, but I thought ....oh never mind, lol

 

Zy x

Well Zy, I must apologise for being so....so......................misunderstood.....lol...

ok so, I was trying to get the feeling across of a woman who hasn't had relations for quite some time, and the fact that even taking a shower, was kind of painful as the jets of water on her body reminded of her of being touched by someone else.....and the last 3 lines were really an attempt to make the whole thing less seriously sad...she was saying that at least her body was in a decent sort of shape so that she could still see her feet and in that, there was still hope for being loved by someone again one day..............phew, got that ? lol

 

Thanks for reading Zy

Valerie X

oops! lol

Hi Valerie

 

I sounded very flippant when I first replied to this - something I wish to apologise for.  I have read this through several times now - and see a lot of things that I should have seen before.

 

Apologies Valereie

 

Emma