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So beautiful She curls around The innocence Of sleep Yet moments In the dark of Night Her spirit So released. He holds her Head To slowly stroke With sleepy Smile And time to while In moments Just for two. <><>> He’ll watch her Stir, and Languid as a cat She’ll purr The wolf inside The man <><><> And afterwards They’ll softly play As moonlight Plays as day And she will Smile Her time to While And softly Stroke her man <><><> ©EMG04 A bit of an experiement - not sure if it works |
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| Indeed it does Emma, soft and dreamy with a breath of sensuality. Very nice. : )lb |
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Thanks lb - its quite fun playing around with different styles - but I think I'll take a back seat after just reading your litttle number! Which by the way was excellent and I forgot to say in my reply Emma |
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Hi Emma, I think this has worked very well ! although I find it hard to read poems with double spacing somehow....can't explain why really except that it somehow seems to stem the flow a little....but then, that's probably just me.....again lol. Valerie X |
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Thanks Valerie, I have no idea why this came out in double line spacing - but for some reason when I paste onto here - my poem decides on a life of its own - argh technology - I'm better with a pen and ink Emma |
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Hiya Emma, This is very beautiful - a wonderful piece. Lv Fluff |
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Thanks Fluff  I am in an experimenting mood with poems at the moment - thanks for the comment Emma |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 9/18/2004 7:27 PM |
This worked well..drawn down the page this way, Emma, as it has such mood feeling and the words 'should' be read slowly, so, it may be accidental, but...it works well for me. Another competent facet to our 'chefette' of love on a plate? lol this was served very warm, lol, Zed |
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Thanks Zy, A play with format of a poem - afraid my roots are with this genre combined with a healthy menu Emma |
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