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New Poems Pge 2 : Softly Play
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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893  (Original Message)Sent: 9/18/2004 10:49 AM

So beautiful

She curls around

The  innocence

Of sleep

Yet moments

In the dark of

Night

Her spirit

So released.

He holds her

Head

To slowly stroke

With sleepy

Smile

And time to while

In moments

Just for two.

<><>>

He’ll watch her

Stir, and

Languid as a cat

She’ll purr

The wolf inside

The man

<><><>

And afterwards

They’ll softly play

As moonlight

Plays as day

And she will

Smile

Her time to

While

And softly

Stroke her man

<><><>

©EMG04

 

A bit of an experiement - not sure if it works



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From: LittleBillSent: 9/18/2004 11:42 AM
Indeed it does Emma, soft and dreamy with a breath of sensuality. Very nice. : )lb

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/18/2004 12:22 PM
Thanks lb - its quite fun playing around with different styles - but I think I'll take a back seat after just reading your litttle number!  Which by the way was excellent and I forgot to say in my reply
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameValerie-JaneSent: 9/18/2004 1:15 PM
Hi Emma,
 
I think this has worked very well ! although I find it hard to read poems with double spacing somehow....can't explain why really except that it somehow seems to stem the flow a little....but then, that's probably just me.....again lol.
Valerie X

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/18/2004 1:23 PM
Thanks Valerie,
 
I have no idea why this came out in double line spacing - but for some reason when I paste onto here - my poem decides on a life of its own - argh technology - I'm better with a pen and ink
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameBouncing_FluffSent: 9/18/2004 4:49 PM
Hiya Emma,
 
This is very beautiful - a wonderful piece.
 
Lv Fluff

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/18/2004 5:12 PM
Thanks Fluff
 
I am in an experimenting mood with poems at the moment - thanks for the comment
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 9/18/2004 7:27 PM
This worked well..drawn down the page this way, Emma, as it has such mood feeling and the words 'should' be read slowly, so, it may be accidental, but...it works well for me.
 
Another competent facet to our 'chefette' of love on a plate? lol this was served very warm, lol, Zed

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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 9/18/2004 7:46 PM
Thanks Zy,
 
A play with format of a poem - afraid my roots are with this genre combined with a healthy menu
 
Emma

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