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| | From: LittleBill (Original Message) | Sent: 10/23/2005 8:24 PM |
If her smile is a
Beach Boy harmony
then her laugh has to
be one of Verdi’s more
subtle arias �?BR>perhaps she’s closer
or maybe I’m just
too far away.
Take that cute
Monet ass of hers,
even Mona doesn’t
move like that and
when she finally stops
it’s like God - yeah
exactly like that.
©lb05
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oooooooooo lb - have you been into the sause again????!!!! LOL great work lb Monet is it - hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm  i suppose Picasso ears as well?  m |
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Hi lb, enjoyed this poem - she sounds like quite a girl - this reminded me of one of those moments - where the camera man shouts stop - and the picture is frozen Emma |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 10/30/2005 12:22 AM |
Concise with such an abstract vision within, lb, this is great and simply runs off the tongue. Love those last two lines, Zed |
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