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| | From: LittleBill (Original Message) | Sent: 10/25/2005 6:09 PM |
Down the staircase
head over heels I
paused a moment
to see how it feels
once you’re in is
there no way out ?
Passed the door
that has no key
looked at Jesus
He looked at me
once you’re in is
there no way out ?
Who’s the whore
is it you or me
I said I love you
what’s to be’s to be
once you’re in is
there no way out ?
I said I love you
and you agreed �?BR>pass the crucible we’ll
quench our greed
but once you’re in
there’s no way out.
©lb05
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Silly, Pretty Babe
So I said you’re beautiful and
you think you got it made
my silly, pretty babe
Every smile brings a tear too
and I told you who’s to save
my silly, pretty babe
remember we walked over
mountains and brooks
I did my best to ignore
the looks you caught from
local boys who’d lost their toys
but still you cried -
You’re beautiful, got it made
but don’t forget you’re my
silly, pretty babe.
©lb05
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you are crankin 'em out lb - well done the first one reminded me of an old ladyfriend keep well, m |
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thanks Mik...do you still have her tel. number....?
: )lb |
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Hi lb, two for the price of one - I enjoyed the first - especially the first stanza - once love has taken its grip - ah well, then you're lost. Emma |
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Thanks Emma...strange....I'd have thought you would have preferred the second...but then that probably says more about me than it does about you. Thanks for the comment.
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