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From: topboy  (Original Message)Sent: 10/26/2005 1:23 PM

TOO BUSY LIVING

 

He had a face like autumn,

It had dropped, and lost its sheen.

A body like a dead bird,

Lifeless, and needs a preen,

But he managed to get attention,

And caught everybody’s eye.

To this day I cannot tell you,

Or begin to explain why.

His charisma was like a magnet.

A smile like magnetic north,

Would always find your humour,

And with a look could bring it forth,

There was nothing that made him special,

No good looks, or silver tongue.

His clothes were not designer,

They just hung where they hung.

He was far too busy living

To be concerned with all of that,

Saw a person walk towards him,

So held the door, and doffed his hat,

He had a mood like springtime,

Like a flower yet to bloom.

The mood was that much brighter

Whenever he was in the room.

I have seen many like him,

All have come, and all have gone,

But they all lack his sparkle

To shine as brightly as he shone.

Oh, he had moods like any other,

But they never lasted long.

See nothing seemed to faze him,

And sadness just seemed wrong.

There was nothing that he wouldn’t try,

No dare he’d never take,

What you saw was what you got.

He was genuine, not fake,

He was far to busy living,

To be bothered with all that stuff,

Like a pearl found in an oyster,

A true diamond in the rough!

 



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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 10/26/2005 3:50 PM
Hi Topboy
 
I think we've all come across someone like that - some people just have a certain charm about them that draws everyone to them
 
Emma

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/30/2005 12:49 AM
Another I enjoyed in both concept and execution, Topboy.
 
But sometimes, I wonder if you read aloud....
 
They just hung where they hung.
 
They just hung where ere they hung.
 
That one extra syllable just seemed to make the difference to the cadence, but I really liked this image brought to life with your words, Zy