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New Poetry Pge 4 : Born Out Of Time
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 10/31/2005 4:12 PM
 
You were born out of time
rushing to go back,
in your twenties style frocks.
 
you smoke from a holder
and drape your hands like a nouveau statuette
Say "golly"
play japes
and listen to New Orleans Jazz.
 
yet in your dreams
of Poirot Murders
and Cowardian manners
do you ever
look beyond the day
and see yourself
as I once did?
 
But you dont
you sip your pimms
and arrange your crustless cucumber tea
sliced in triangles
arranged like flowers
and watch the evenings go
and no one knows
whats its like to be alone
in 1921
like you
 
you were born out of time
and the smoke rises gently
from behind your
window.


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 Message 2 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamecrispleavesSent: 10/31/2005 4:50 PM
Enjoyed the irony of the 'rebel' but not of this time.The period references were deftly detailed.

Pip

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 Message 3 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/31/2005 11:05 PM
Excellent, Mark, so well caught in descriptive amosphere.
 
I could envisage the heads turning in the present time at this Miss-placed
Lady. Zy
 

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 Message 4 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 11/1/2005 8:34 AM
Hi Mark,
 
some people are permanently in a different time - almost as if they were born to play a part - you created a wonderful picture with this poem.
 
Emma
 

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 Message 5 of 9 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 11/1/2005 8:43 AM
This lady actually exists shes an eccentric aquaintence of mine, but she is as the poem depicts a very lonely woman. thanks for your comments.
Mark

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From: LittleBillSent: 11/1/2005 10:32 AM
Sounds like you've captured her to a T Mark...love the detail. Good piece of work, I enjoyed.

: )lb

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Sent: 11/1/2005 10:42 PM
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From: MSN NicknamewildestscarletsunriseSent: 11/1/2005 11:14 PM
Hi Mark
Your poem really takes you back to that era, I can picture it perfectly.  That it was inspired by somebody, makes it all the more sadder, still I suppose there are lots of eccentric and lonely people about. A good poem, I enjoyed reading it.
 
Jacqui

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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 11/3/2005 5:29 PM
Thanks Clive, LB & Jacqui, yes I suppose it does capture something shes almost a Picture poem here. Mark

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