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New Poetry Pge 4 : i see the world as one
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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34  (Original Message)Sent: 11/2/2005 12:41 AM
the cycle of life go on
 
see me clinging to a raindrops tail
being whipped nor‘east in a sailor’s gale
splash and running down the great blue whale
the cycle of life go on
 
spray coughing-up from ruddy seascape ledge
mist-witch blown down to precipice edge
scuttling back to join blue-white wave-surge wedge
the cycle of life go on
 
rent - sow - tend what ere on-earth you reap
sweet maze or standing bitter-barley deep
spent - it’s just your soul you keep
the cycle of life go on
 
two sons setting in the western sky
three daughters rising in their minders eye
nurture them so your progeny can fly
the cycle of life go on
 
cease the wishing - quell the want
convert vision to veracity - no need to vaunt
live thy dream - flaunt envy’s taunt
the cycle of life go on
 
love starts life or we would no be
love will sustain us through eternity
even every moment when joy seems gone to sea
the cycle of life go on

____________________________
 
 
i see the world as one

i sense the conscience of the common man
i seize the moment as my spirit can
feel my soul - pink, black, or tan
i see the world as one
 
too-tall treetops are not beyond my reach
spewing-symbols were never meant to teach
mountain tops or ruddy surf-washed beach
i see the world as one
 
walk with me down a tortured path
yours or mine - we face life’s wrath
we can cry - run - or even stop to laugh
i see the world as one
 
trip-wires - pitfalls - and crystal chards
crawling-walking along each longest-yard
accepting our good though our souls are marred
i see the world as one
 
low-life lurking just to do us in
angles to the rescue - to the scum’s chagrin
in the end WE are making goodness win
i see the world as one
 
place two placards o’er my pauper’s grave
one with the name my loving mother gave
the other with the names of ones i helped save
i see the world as one
 
when i return i won’t be dressed in white
i’ll be an angel-helper on patrol at night
seeking those whose malice must be put right
i’ll see the world has won
 
before the rising sun
 
___________________
 
these appeared together - so they are posted such
 
thanks for reading - in advance,
 
m


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From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 11/2/2005 1:59 PM
Mikhail the philosopher - I do like these - full of what life is - a wishful tender look at a world and a time that we are only a small part of - yet to us our time is important as are our loved ones.
 
Emma

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From: LittleBillSent: 11/2/2005 7:25 PM
My old English teacher Mr. Watkins ( great english guy in a Welsh school - he had it rough, believe me) always used to say never judge a piece of Literature because that piece may be judging you ....your work has depth Mik, and it demands a lot from the reader - that's not often seen on poetry sites and defies the MTV attention span of many a modern wit. I enjoyed this, made me think about what I write...I don't do that 'save the world' stuff...I leave that in the capable hands of fine poets like yourself. Thanks for making me take the time to stop and think.

: )lb

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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 11/3/2005 12:27 AM
thanks Emma
 
after re-reading these i'm quite disappointed
 
there's something there - but it needs polish
 
thank you ,
 
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 11/3/2005 12:33 AM
hi lb
 
i was never into martyrdom me self - though i abhor injustice and have been known to take issue with it directly
 
ah - but - i'm old now - i just write and wish - and lick some milk out the kitty's dish LOL
 
best,
 
m

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2005 1:32 AM
Two very engrossing pieces, Mikhail, I like the first best.
 
As has just been said by lb, well composed and inspiration to make one think, I like that combination, Zy

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From: MSN NicknamecrispleavesSent: 11/3/2005 5:01 PM
Enjoyed your poems m., especially the first one, lots of verve and song.

Pip

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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 11/3/2005 11:10 PM
Thanks Zy
 
somehow they are on the same theme
 
glad you liked,
 
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 11/3/2005 11:13 PM
thank you Pip for taking the time to read and comment
 
i worked a  long time (hours) on each of them - although the beginning of both came to me as usual - normally if i have to work for hours on these things they aren't as good as if i just write them down and put them away
 
thank you again,
 
m

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