I just lost a decent reply to these, Mikhail, so will come back again later, Zy

come back Zy

 

what did you have to say

 

i know it was important,

 

m

lol, oh yes???The site was playing up a bit, Mikhail, you know the way it does, piccies not appearing, message boxes vanishing but not sending.

 

Ahhh...the first, I so know that feeling, I am such an insomniac, yet I be get tired and lie there halfway between for ages...and then the mind goes into overdrive, such thought and plans and images...so I get up again rather than persevere. I liked this. Layout and rhyme.

 

The second, mmnnn...children....we have to place some guidelins to contain childishly innocent spontinaity from causing themselves harm, but yes, we have no right to live our lives/dreams through them, let them choose their own dreams, they have to live them as adults. Whatever the consequences.

 

What super words, from both you and C. S & N. But please don't double post, Mikhail, each of these deserve their own thread, we are not short of space here, Zy

thank you Zy

 

have to post stuff that appears together - it's lie tsins - can't really be separated even if separated - ya know???????

 

anyway thanks for taking the time to comment,

 

m

hi Clive

 

thank you for the comment

 

you are right - the rhythm isn't right

 

the line was suppose to be . . . . . 'slammed the front gate'

 

for me - the way i read it 'front' works - however

 

i very much respect your comment and can see how front can be left out as well

 

please do not feel badly about commenting - i really like it

 

thanks again,

m

thanks Clive,

 

m