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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34  (Original Message)Sent: 11/4/2005 4:48 PM
dark angel
 
if i were a visitor i’d not visit you
i’d visit all those who did not what me to
i’d visit the maimed and the old and the blind
i’d visit and never expect they’d be kind
or expect i’d be welcome or seen as too good
or be held or give pity - no never i would
want them to ever feel less a man
or less a full-woman - oh god if i can
help me to be the dark angel tonight
the one that’s in favour of love at first sight
the one that is willing the one with good’s might
the one trouncing evil whenever i fight
the one that no matter the glow of the skin
no matter the depth i forgive every sin
no matter the defect no matter their plight
no matter if they need a soft kiss goodnight
no matter their affliction no matter their cruel
no matter that they want me to-be their old fool
no mater my condition no matter my blight
no matter if i’m not a saint in their sight
let me pass-on the warm soul-healing light
help me to be dark angel tonight
 
this last one - then i'm off,
m


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 Message 2 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/4/2005 7:04 PM
Hy Mikhail, I am certain you will be a comfort to many this week, and I hope there is an angel's arm there for you too.
 
Have a safe journey....Zy

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 Message 3 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamewildestscarletsunriseSent: 11/4/2005 8:31 PM
There is so much good and pure thought in this poem Mikhail.
I like it a lot.
Look forward to your return.
Take care.
 
Jacqui

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 Message 4 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknameForestFlower5893Sent: 11/5/2005 5:38 PM
Hi Mikhail,
 
A lovely poem, as Jacqui says a lot of good and pure thought.
 
Safe journey
 
Emma

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 Message 5 of 6 in Discussion 
From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 11/6/2005 3:38 PM
thank you Jacqui and Emma
 
i made it home,
 
thanks for caring,
 
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemikhail34Sent: 11/6/2005 3:39 PM
Hy Zy
 
Aunt Vin is my comfort - still
 
thanks,
 
m

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