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New Poetry Pge 5 : bushboy �?a trilogy (part deux)
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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334  (Original Message)Sent: 10/13/2006 12:36 AM
bushboy �?a trilogy (part deux)


while on a safari
in Congo so deep
i met a small bushboy
appearing under my feet

he carried a pack boys
in stifling heat
twice his own weight boys
on nothing to eat

he went on no ration
‘cause he lagged behind
i would’t’a cared boys
but this lad blew my mind

he went ever forward
w’i naught on his feet
and grinned at the master
though he was so beat

i could no longer give whittle
for the boy last in line
my walls finally crumbled
as i wished he was mine

so i could just feed him
and nourish his mind
since his soul was unbeaten
as he conquered mine

so i told the head tracker
i needed small hands
to work my small camera
upon my command

and he sent me the wee boy
with large toothy grin
he said ‘isha missa�?BR>i said ‘gunga din�?BR>
he tilted his head
as i started to laugh
he said ‘got camera boss�?BR>i said ‘can you laugh�?BR>
he carried my camera
snapped pictures of dirt
not one useful photo (i thought)
but my camera never got hurt

he dashed and he darted
from pillar to post
snapping the shutter
at dirtdivil ghosts

and ants catching spiders
and beetles with dung
of buffalo piles
and songs packer’s sung

he’d run up to show me
his new work �?with pride
that smile in dimensions
destroyed my insides

i made sure he had rations
when he returned to their lot
like wee League of Nations
eating from one nasty pot

no matter
he grew strong and lively
each day by each day
he’d run ‘long side me
yakking away

he told me of famine
and firry plains
he told me of killings
and he kept naming names

of folks in his family, who
left him in dust
he told me these stories
with a thick outer curst

seems his mother had died
sometime in spring
and his father ‘ate bullets�?BR>as he fought v. mighty king

he was brave and vivacious
for a wee spindly lad, and
his English audacious
he’d lament ‘Eeeng’ish baaaad?�?BR>
though pitiful orphan
neither pity in his grin
his heart was of kings�?boys
i learned life from him

at the end of safari
he went on his way
along with the trackers
he now worked for pay

i wish he’d come with me
in my humble poem
but he told me ‘hey missa�?BR>‘de desert ma home�?BR>
i wonder what happened
to smallest bushboy
i wish him safe passage
i wish him full joy

what are left are his pictures
now so precious to me
i’ve credited ‘boy isha�?BR>alongside of ‘me�?BR>


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 10/13/2006 1:14 AM
There's no doubt that you took this 'smiler' to your heart, Mikhail, a beautifully told picture/story, contrasting so aptly with part one (now to part three)

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/13/2006 1:20 AM
thank you friend Zydha,
m

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 10/13/2006 5:45 AM
yes I agree pictures please!

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 10/13/2006 9:32 AM
sorry ladies - no pics for 'puter - only black and white curling photos for old eyes to see

best,
m

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