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| From:  makhala334 (Original Message) | Sent: 10/15/2006 7:58 PM |
the perfect door
open - - - - - - nevermore
passing through that squirming portal
onward �?sad and whimpering-mortal
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if i had hands �?would you hold them
ah �?but thy commands �?are cold ones
i’ll flee
through perfect door
where you’ll find me
nevermore
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you can wait �?i’ll not see you
you’ll be too late �?for my Xanadu
you’ll live without a core
you’ll not get through
my perfect door
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open
nevermore
'click'
best,
m
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Goodness me Mikhail, I just dont know how you do it!! This piece is once more an absolute stunner!! I really am envious of your style and individuality. You have something extremely rare and special - this would definitely be one I would like to hesr in audio! Best Wishes Fluff x |
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thank you dear Fluff
you make me blush
x,
m
ps - as you can see - zy and i have taken the liberty to record one of yours - i am hoping you like it - though my voice is a bit low for the feminine touch - sorry - your work was so enthralling i had to give it a try |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 10/16/2006 2:03 AM |
and I had a try with this one, Mikhail, I am not too sure if I got it right, but again, I love your work, just fear not giving the correct internation. This has such an air of finality, Mikhail, a positive 'turning away' from someone/something. Like the layout which with your work...always has bearing on the rhythm, Zy |
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you are right Zy
you did so well on the reading - i was skeptical about reading my own - but - couldn't resist
m |
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i really didn't think this would be good in Audio - but - you convinced me thanks, m |
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Yes this is otherworldly as Stellar says. Every one of your poems amazes me and is so powerful and excellent! For some reason I cannot get the audio thingy to work! MSN better straighten up! It keeps freezing grrrr. |
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thank you so much Stella - my muse can take me anywhere - sometimes i get scared
best wishes,
m |
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thank yoiu Dixie
i hope your Audio gets vocal pretty soon
best wishes,
mikhail |
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