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Hello all, I am entering a competition by Cinnamon Press and the winner gets their collection of poetry published. To start with I need to send off 10 poems and I would really appreciate people's feedback as to which you all think are some of my best? So far, I have: - A Bed of Red Roses
- Black Beauty (quite recent)
- Just Jennie
- Nameless Beauty, and
- Crashing Angel, Freedom Fall.
If any of you think that those arent the best choice so far, could you let me know and make some suggestions pretty please lol cus I'm stuck. I read my writing and think it's all on the same par - you lot are the experts cus you're my "audience" lol (get you!)  All of those can be found somewhere on the site - if you scroll back through the pages or look on my collection (which I need to update!). Any comments would be much appreciated. Many thanks to you all. love Fluff x |
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Secret Love
Tell me . . .
Cry For Me
any of the ones you felt that powerful hurt you felt as a youngster
they are so gripping
good luck dear Fluff,
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 10/17/2006 2:04 AM |
Hy Fluff, good luck. You know the two I really like from your list and I like Mikhail's choice, but this is one of yours I also like. Living Dead Girl. Dance for me, My living dead girl, Twirl me through Your coiled dreams. When darkness falls, Let's take the floor - Surrender our souls To Satan once more. Take to the rhythm Of lonesome cries, Feel the chill From whispered sighs, As the hearts of those Who silently weep, Splinter beneath Our bleeding feet. |
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Hello Mikhail Thank you for your input as always. I shall definitely keep everyone updated and let you know I get on.  Fluff |
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I am having to repost to everything here. Good luck Fluff! Hey that rhymes lol. None of mine were posted for two days! Can we shoot MSN? |
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