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New Poetry Pge 6 : Was that a yes?
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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1  (Original Message)Sent: 10/31/2007 9:43 PM
( I found this beneath the hard drive of my computer.I can't remember if I ever posted it ...apologies if I have ! )
 
Was that a yes?
 
I wanted to hold your hand
and walk with you, us together
towards your cottage, from mine.
I knew you wanted to laugh aloud
as we moved on past the poster
billboard reminiscent of Wonderbra
and Benetton's Third World pretend
caring..trying to make us believe
their gaping wounded heart.
On past the news shop and
parking limit signs.
I remember I was dressed
in poetic velvet swagger
and what you wore I dare not say.
I just wanted you totally and
you to know me as I am
surrounded by life's whirlwinds.
We sat there listening to taxis
passing by and feeling
that misty fine rain that falls
so often here near the River Wey
and the farm where I work.
Soon you laughed out loud
sending rapid ripples across
my room..towards me.
Then you went silent and stared
straight at me.
I couldn't help wondering,
was that a yes?
 
 


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 10/31/2007 9:54 PM
Enchanting share, and no, I never have read it, so no apologies needed. You do wonder with poetry, it isn't anything I have experience...thanks for sharing your marvelous talents.
 
Regards,
 
Maria

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 10/31/2007 11:54 PM
Maria...your generosity can make me blush...don't let that stop you !!  from jj  

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 11/1/2007 1:14 AM
Another profound write, JJ.  I hope it was a yes, and that you pleasured each other for years after... bear

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/1/2007 1:53 AM
Can't help thinking there is a 'cheeky' side to you Jimmy, lol, for....
 
I was lost, dreamily, in this lovely romantic interlude and in that last line, I smiled,
 
could almost see the twinkle in your eye,
 
am glad you found this one and no, haven't read it before, Zy

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 Message 6 of 11 in Discussion 
From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 11/1/2007 8:23 PM
Such a beautiful and romantic write, Jimmy. You had me lost in dreams...

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 11/1/2007 8:47 PM
Of course it was a 'yes'........ahhh Jimmy...this was simply gorgeous,romantic and oo everything lol...super super write...x

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From: MSN NicknameForgottenMelody4Sent: 11/1/2007 9:14 PM
This was simply gorgeous. And couldn't stop myself from smiling. :)

Melody x

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/2/2007 2:33 PM
Yes, yes yes Jimmy!  Such a poignant write!

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From: MSN Nicknamejimmyjoyce1Sent: 11/2/2007 10:24 PM
To ... Bear.. Zy.. P3.. Stella../Melody.. & Dixie thankyou for all your replies and the kindly comments.... and for those who want to know.. the answer was .. yes!!!  Best wishes from jj

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/3/2007 11:55 PM
YAY!

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