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| From:  makhala334 (Original Message) | Sent: 11/1/2007 12:38 AM |
lost in worlds of wants and whims
of slashing haunts and homonyms
last found creature never wins trace my relief - again i am left to sink beyond cross grave
i cannot blink i can’t be saved
i can’t free the best �?the real - the brave life can not be me so
i am not here
you are not near
awaiting fate to commandeer the scraps hurt left
called me best, m |
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Excellent, I really like the format, it complements ther verse... bear |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/1/2007 2:00 AM |
Homonyns are you to a 't', Mikhail, lol, I read and reread and there is always more than one way to interprate... another where I feel a wanting ... a need of something, somewhere, but mystical in your words. The layout (as bear said) does add so much for the reader, great pacing, Zy |
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thank you bear you are too kind best, m |
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hy Zy this was inspired by your add-a-stanza string -but hoped more would read if i added it here as well thank you for your thoughtful commentary best, m |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 11/1/2007 2:23 AM |
Yes, I spotted it there and was wondering how I could follow it, lol I am trying to encourage everyone to visit the perimeter threads, Mikhail, and now to try to do something in Add-a-Stanza,  if I can, Zy |
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you already lead dear friend you do not follow you are to be followed if one dares best, m |
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nice to read you again,  |
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thank you Cara it is good to return and write again best, m |
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