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New Poetry Pge 6 : Self Deception
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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8  (Original Message)Sent: 11/2/2007 10:05 PM
She'll leave a thousand shards
caught by surprise 
no hurt more sharply cut
pretence with all his tricks
hides behind her corner
as an afterthought,
a glance passed over
 
sad sighs live alone
why is there belief in beauty
she swore time and time again
never to play the fool
still laughing
feels herself sinking
sinking into the tomb
 
her marbled mouth
seeks solace between
crisp linen bed sheets
clinical
 hears his castanet heat
come up smeary
loose itself
in her illusion of love


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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 11/3/2007 2:24 AM
whooo, tonight's read is a night for thinking, lol, Stella, have enjoyed this one twice already.
 
Dark....a feeling of resignation to "Is this all there is?" A deep read well penned, Zy

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 11/3/2007 2:32 AM
A dark pen and a very powerful write.

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 11/3/2007 12:56 PM
how lovely to think you read this twice Zy...thats praise enough...and yes you are spot on with your interpretation...you are beginning to read me toooo well woman !!!.....

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 11/3/2007 12:58 PM
Perhaps the emotion that this one was written in came through?...I do hope so...loll  hey Poetess3 thanks for reading..xxx

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 11/3/2007 11:57 PM
truly enjoyed this one!

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 11/4/2007 3:02 AM
very deep writing... bar

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From: MSN NicknameCara_inSpiritSent: 11/4/2007 9:10 AM
you convey the marbled feeling
cold stone like
you have used great im agery  to create a frightening image
 
Cara
 

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