Been reading and trying to figure this one, Mikhail, lol, and if you can't I will no doubt flounder in the dark but here goes...

 

There is a negativity in the view of life, (or a disappointment in the negativities) and the last two lines read in contradiction of each other....as if one hopes that in the final moment, there will be that sought after unity, mmnnn, deep, but you never write shallow, My Friend, and I am probably a mile out, lol, but I enjoyed reading, Zy

left me with a sense of sadness and grief comes to mind.

 

hugs

Cara

i think you are all right

 

this is definitely about passing - and the leveling of all humanity at that event - how some things that mattered before no longer matter - and a new harmony transcends all life - when all material things are stripped away and everything is again equal - just as at birth

 

still not sure though

 

thank you each for trying and for your excellent input

 

best,

m

Thanks for the explanation as I was going in a totally different direction... lol.  A smoothly flowing, easily read, poem that is very deep.  An excelleent contribution... bear

thanks bear - you are too kind

 

best regards,

m

I may be off track too m. lol, but it appears to me it is about love and caring dying in this world and saying goodbye to what should be.  There should be peace and harmony instead of death and destruction.  I could be wrong lol.