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| From:  bunnsosoft (Original Message) | Sent: 1/31/2008 6:00 AM |
Oceans separate Lovers The sound of hearts speak Beat in rhythm with sea But in one's own island Dreamt up to see A haven beautiful Heavenly. Maria© |
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What a beautiful image you have shared here I love the ocean and this is close to my idear of heaven I also really like your imagery of the ocean she is a mystery hugs Cara |
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Such beautiful words, Maria. You had me lost in dreams... mmm...  |
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Lovely pic and poem Maria and take me there. |
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The pictures you put in my mind are always as beautiful as the images you write about, only here I have words to go with them.
Melody x |
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Thank you everyone...the weather we're experiencing made me think of a beautiful hide away, a deserted island somewhere in the sun, where it is warm, the wind today, chills to the bone...  Maria  |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 2/1/2008 1:10 AM |
mmnnn....we have had a day like that over here, Maria, so your post was a 'warming interlude', thanks. We are all islands metaphorically and can also remove in mind to one anytime, so love this short and inviting piece, Zy |
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we had several inches of snow last night so this was refreshing... I took a day off because of bthe alleged bad weather... bear |
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Thank you Zy, I was feeling the winter blahs, so thought I'd cheer things up with a fantasy piece... Maria |
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You have to admit it Bear, the beach does look inviting...  Thanks for your comments. Maria |
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