very well done kayano

 

i am so very happy to hear another poet say 'i don't know where this came from' - since many of mine are just that way

 

best,

m

Bravo, Stella... Great flow and imagery in this... bear

There's quite a positive and very relevant social comment running through this piece, Stella,

I read your comment about not knowing where it came from....

I'd say, it came from life around us, these days, perhaps your absorbing subconscious at work,

 lol, but a really super write anyways and very lyrical,

Hush Little Baby, Don't You Cry immediately spun through my mind as I read, Zy

sounds like a lullaby and truly enjoyed this!

lol neat interpretation Phillip....thanks for your reply...x

yup you got me on both counts Zy....that was the tune I had running through my head and yes was a social statement too....this write just sorta happened...xxx

I am sure your voice Melody would be much sweeter than mine..lol..xx

aww Dix thats kind...xx

thankyou Bear for the Bravo...xxx

well there you go m...none of us are alone...xx

yes Maria.....sad but true...x

Remember the one that goes:

 

"Hush little baby don't say a word,

mama's gonna buy you a mockingbird.

If that mockingbird won't sing,

mama's gonna buy you a diamond ring."

That's it, Dix, and one of it's verses starts...

 

Hush Little Baby, don't you cry

Mamma's gonna sing you a lullaby  Zy