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New Poetry Pge 7 : 'Virtual' Laundry Blues; Steve's Challenge
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From: MSN NicknameZydha  (Original Message)Sent: 2/2/2008 12:29 AM
 
Verses to the tune of 'The House of The Rising Sun'
 
 
It should be an easy option
for those with 'dirty' minds,
or just for those with 'issues'
then, the volatile of kinds.

Take a break and clean them out
There is a need ~ without a doubt.

Get the cheerers of the chaos
the aggitants of wars,
rid them of their blindness
and stop them keeping scores.

Put leaders in the firing line
They'll redirect in record time.

Criminals who walk the streets
could clean their needs away,
by placing thoughts into a 'port'
each weekly laundry day.

A little wash and tumble dry
Might make them really wonder 'why'

Tempers would be tempered
if daily ~ scrubbed for calm,
removing red to peaceful blue
with an electronic balm.

Plug it in and count to ten
Stop the fuse from blowin' again.

The meek who take the bullying
might stand up for their right,
when doused in cyber self esteem
each time they sleep at night.

Subconscious mental building could
Keep them standing ~ where they stood.

So won't some smart inventor
design some natty 'cosher'
to, cleanse the world of badness
with a USB ... brain washer.



(c) ZYDHA HART 2007


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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 2/4/2008 8:16 PM
oo Zy a strong poem indeedy...enjoyed the way you put it to that tune....xxx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/7/2008 1:53 AM
Hiya, Stella, I'm not really all that 'puter literate, but,
 
this was originally written for a challenge about gadgets,
 
I just happen to find that's a tune which gives me a beat
 
and I've about half a dozen done to it, thanks for reading, Zy x