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| From:  Zydha (Original Message) | Sent: 2/4/2008 1:32 AM |
I hear the silence, can you? It's stillness is almost tangible to the touch. Pensive, awaiting the sounds which break into one's thoughts, into one's psyche. This is the hour, the nearness time of all escaped dreams. Tick, tock, go the footsteps of time, drip, drop, go the tears in my eyes, passing time, passing life, passing through. |
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This is very deep and dark, but I liked it...very nice Zy, thanks for sharing your oldie with me... Hugs, Maria  |
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silence at times can be over whelming time can seem to stand still and then you wake and find so much has passed you by you capture this so well Zy Cara |
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| | | From: kayano8 | Sent: 2/4/2008 8:31 PM |
This is the hour, the nearness time of all escaped dreams. oh most excellent Zy....gave me a sense of leaving something....great verse...x |
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this is truly excellent Zy. |
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