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New Poetry Pge 7 : endless sky
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 2/4/2008 2:06 PM
 
In the space that is left
There is an empty hole
Just a phone call away
its not enough to console
Its like an endless sea
Without a harbour at hand
Its like an endless sky
without an airport to land
Everywhere I look
I don't know where to begin
It's like an open book
without the pages filled in
I'm like a little child
taking everything in
I'm getting close to be wild
Commit the ultimate sin
But you can call my name
Like a dog I'll return
Its a simple game
one I dont need to learn
Everywhere I look
Everythings on the turn
Like an open book
its just the language to learn
And when the time comes along
Maybe we will have changed
thats the trouble with this
Its like your always estranged
On an endless sea
with no harbour to hand
Like an endless Sky
wih no airport to land.
 
4/2/2008
 


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 2/4/2008 5:02 PM
The sky's the limit when thoughts come...we search far and wide, hoping it gets resolved by themselves...Life is strange...a mystery. A write sometimes makes the writer acquire meaning , or maybe come closer to it...!
 
Well done Mark.
 
Maria

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 2/4/2008 8:33 PM
thoughtful write Mark
 
distance always carries its doubts ....you put this feeling into words very well...xx

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 2/5/2008 12:56 AM
Very well done and thoughtful piece.  They say the sky is the limit.

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From: MSN NicknameForgottenMelody4Sent: 2/5/2008 12:53 PM
A piece that has me thinking about doubts that are endless. But not all distances are as endless as the sky.

Good one.

Melody x

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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 2/6/2008 3:06 PM
yes doubts are endless so is distance sometimes.

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