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I’d melt a rainbow
By the fire of
A burning sunrise
If it meant I’d see
The light in your eyes
For eternity.
I’d banish
The grey horizons,
Smudged
By the gentle
Rainfall of tears,
If it meant I could
Fill your life with
Heavenly shades
Of beauty as
Colourful
As you.
I’d capture
Every moment
If it meant I could
Make time
With you
Never-ending.
I’d build castles
In the sky and
Write my words
On every brick
If it meant I could
Give you the dreams...
Of a fairytale
Made to last. (C) 2008 Fluff For Paula - probably the most amazing person I met in 2007 xx
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| Lovely words BF! If I said these beautiful words to my wife,her reply would be : Great,but now you mention bricks,you need to make a start with rendering the garden wall! [Just joking!] |
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This is sooo beautiful Fluff! |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 2/5/2008 1:39 AM |
Great to see you writing again, Fluff, this is quite lovely, nice tribute to Paula too, love, Zy x PS Hows the new course coming along? |
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Wonderfully scripted, Fluff... bear |
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What wondeful images in a colourful tribute.
Melody x |
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stunning imagery �?magic metaphor a Fluff original thanks dear Fluff for sharing, m |
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Lovely poem Fluff, (Hope I may call you that??) Best wishes Val |
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Lovely Fluff, fine job done, enjoy your scripting... Maria  |
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Hi Fluff, Reading your words has made me wish that they'd come from my own pen. A beautiful poem. Poetess xx |
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Hello all Thank you so much for your lovely comments. The lady this piece was written for is absolutely wonderful - one of the most fabulous people I met last year :) I am definitely going to hang around here more and by the way, for those of you who know about my course, I've just handed in my first assignment! yay! Love you all dearly Fluff x |
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