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| | From:  steve_riggs (Original Message) | Sent: 2/5/2008 7:57 PM |
I sometimes wonder
At things I have said
Should I have been
Lead or led? Have I been
lying or laying
I'm never sure
Of words I'm saying Weather it's wind
Or a clock to wind
Wether its right
Drives me out of my mind No matter I try
Not to abuse each word
But sometimes
it is abuse that's heard Should a comma go here, An apostrophie there: I just write poetry; And don't really care.....  |
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It must be hard To be a bard, But not to know Which one should go Where, or there, Or even swear That one is right, It must be a plight A foreigners delight  Val |
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I know it is not fair, when English is a foreigner's dispair...to brandish here and there, commas everywhere ... I think that if you're kind, you wouldn't really mind. Get good out of a write, food for the mind. Cute verse Steve...I happen to feel the same way... Maria  |
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Might and mite. Site and sight. Words for me Are like fishing In the sea. Grammar is also Easy for me. A comma here, an apostrophe there. Help yourself, There's plenty to share. Bean and been. Son and sun I won't stop 'Till my work is done. |
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It's "ence" and "ance"
Which lead me a dance -
Independence,deliverance.
Is there a rule perchance? |
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| | | From: Zydha | Sent: 2/6/2008 3:20 AM |
Durghh... is me where the 'i' or 'e' is... after a 'c'... for I never know where they should go but, I just let it flow. Enjoyed, Steve, and your thread compilation, Zy |
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Truly enjoyed this mismatch of words, could be heard or really herd? Sometimes sit instead of sat, I just write poetry--so take that! Loved it Steve. |
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