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New Poetry Pge 7 : Virus
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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8  (Original Message)Sent: 2/5/2008 9:46 PM
Separated..sorted
by distinguishable
coarseness
[compacted]
bled in a tube
lid squashed
tapped
left on a high shelf
 
almost forgotten
until the need arrives
[who chooses
the time]
I wonder
would they give a toss
 
if aroused into action
as an outcry of protest  [hah]
it wakes as a wave
spreads out
covers...everything
 
they lack sensibility of choice
no distinctions made
 
although expected
shock remains a friend
and here we are
clutching at our own stupidity
drowning
under 'made by man'
 
don't cry for the unborn
they're the lucky ones
who would think
deafness could be a pleasure
blindness a gift


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 2/5/2008 10:10 PM
Amazing how much misery a virus can make, I didn't know that they caused most of humanty's pain...
 
Great poem Kayo...finely expressed...
 
Mariaxx

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From: MSN Nicknamekayano8Sent: 2/5/2008 10:28 PM
well Maria was listening to the radio and it was discribing that a virus has been made that is totally unatural...now don't know bout anyone else but that smacks to me of weapon of mass destruction big time....
so thats wher this came from..
as ever thanks for taking the time to read my stuff.....xxx

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/6/2008 3:12 AM
Yikes, inverted germ warfare in the making, Stella, and a notable comment.
 
It scares me when we are so dependant on the 'stuff' being isolated safely from ourselves, not to mention it's purpose..
 
Saw the item on the news last night where a young mother died an hour after giving birth,
because, obviously, the person who injected her with the wrong solution...couldn't read the contents, yet we could...clearly....oh yes...it's ok,
they are going to 'colour code' dangerous drugs in future! Scary, Zy
 
 

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 2/6/2008 1:09 PM
I hear ya too!  The CDC here in Atlanta says they have stuff we have never heard of.  Makes me wonder what they are fiddling around with.

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From: MSN NicknameMindmanukSent: 2/6/2008 3:02 PM
for an unnatural virus its a remarkably good pen just hope you dont give it to me...
mark g

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From: MSN NicknamePoetess-three1Sent: 2/7/2008 4:33 AM
Scary stuff! It makes me wonder what they're going to do next!

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 2/8/2008 2:53 AM
powerful writing, Stellaxx... bear

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