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i had two chocolate

but then i quit

i promised me mum

i wouldn't dip

into the depths

of that chocolate goo

i promised me mum

i'd kick the chocolate do

but i fell offa the wagon

strait into the pot

it was molten and flowing

and pipingly hot

i drew in the vapours

i stuck in me thumb

no more taudry capers

i had to have some

oooooooooooooooooh

it was so rich and so creamy

it stuck to me tongue

it swilled down me gullet

me senses went numb

me eyes they went glassy

me knees they went weak

you could say i was sassy

as i felt like a geek

cause in the light glomin

i peeked out me eye

and there she stood knackered

and she's startin ta cry

oh mum - me dear mummy

i fell from me pearch

and comin so swiftly

she flew with a learch

naooooooo - ya big tortoise

yer messin me pie

i had the pot boilin

fer the best ya could buy

a chocolate tourte-'as

best i can bake

and now my dear Norris

there's nothing i'll make

and the chocolate yer lapin

wi' yer lips like a cow

will be sent down the scuppers

who's proud o ye now??

giggle,

I truly enjoyed this mikhail! Just be careful you don't get baked! lol.

I know that one. I've tried many times to stay away from chocolate, but I just can't.

I love this choco-poem!

This had me smiling the whole way through... Excellent pen, M... bear

Me too, Mikhail, I love 'story poems'

and this was great fun to read, thanks, but...

we may have to start calling you 'Charlie', lol, Zy

thank you so much Poetess - i have the craving for that beautiful chocolate as well

thank you bear - most happy and honoured you enjoyed this - i had fun writing

good to go on the light side now and again

i Zy - thanks so much

Charlie????

Chaplin??

best, always,

Hey that movie was on here last night lol.

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