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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334  (Original Message)Sent: 2/6/2008 2:08 PM
 
the world is uncommon
the world is unkind
the world is undon-in'
or is it my mind
 
i went to the stable
to get me a ride
i saddled me horse
with only its hide
 
we lit out with our kepis
headed for doom
though me and me chappies
had not left my room
 
we sped like white whiskers
blown by the wind
white bones to the riskers
as we rattle �?the din
 
to-toot went the bugle
to-too went we-oui
to-too to the bounty
thou hads’t upon we
 
to-toot to the riders
to-toot to the chief
to-too as we’re dancin�?BR>on yon-pimlico beach
 
to-too went the cannon
to-too we’re too steep
to-too as thy tannins
up-nose do they creep
 
i wish my heart broken
to feel something sweet
to know who’ll be ownin�?BR>my soul as i sleep
 
i wish thy heart burning
so close unto mine
to mount the great stairway
at the close of the line
 
where storm-clouds are meeting
in mayhem sublime
to live without beating
ourselves �?one last time
 
the world is uncommon
the world is unkind
the world is undon-in'
it’s here �?in my mind
 
for the lonely - the lost - the hurt - oh - the cost
 
always,
m


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 2/6/2008 6:09 PM
Wise statement Mahkala...makes me ponder...thank you for sharing...
 
Maria

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 2/6/2008 10:57 PM
makes me ponder and think too Mikhail.  gripping and great penning.

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From: MSN Nickname1oldarmybearSent: 2/7/2008 12:11 AM
potent words, M... bear

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/7/2008 12:28 AM
I feel much angst in this piece, Mikhal,
you have added a footnote, but in these words
you capture the conflict of the obliging soul...
and the strong wish for peace at the end of the line.
 
This had an almost dream/nightmare quality about it,
or memories, My Friend, so well penned, Zy

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 2/7/2008 12:38 AM
thank you so much Maria - i get sad over such things
 
best,
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 2/7/2008 12:40 AM
thanks Dix - you are always so kind
 
best,
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 2/7/2008 12:41 AM
thank you bear for taking the time to read and commet on this work
 
best,
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 2/7/2008 12:48 AM
thank you dear Zy
 
as always you are too kind
 
this work was brought on by a dream
 
i was in the sahara - and there was 'the ishas' - i tried in vein - again - to rescue them with a skeleton army on skeleton horses - hides flying behind each steed - helmets akimbo - eyes empty sockets
 
probably becaue i'd been watching lord of the rings with Iain - and thinking about sanctuary - who knows
 
you read this very well dear friend
 
best, always,
m

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From: MSN Nicknamemakhala334Sent: 2/7/2008 12:50 AM
thank you so much friend-Peter for taking the time to read and comment on this work
 
as usual
 
i wish love to win
 
and good to prevail
 
best,
m

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