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| | From: Jayne (Original Message) | Sent: 2/6/2008 5:40 PM |
The deepening indigo sky With a tracery of fingers Reaching toward the stars.
Evening falls.
In the distance an owl calls And is answered. Gradually the stars Many miles away Sparkle and glisten. |
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Hi Jayne, It's been a nice day here, and maybe a starlit night. Not sure about the owls though. Welcome to the board.  |
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Great imagery...I could hear the owls and visualize the stars...thanks for sharing, welcome... Maria |
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| Hello Jayne. One never tires of looking into the sunset and sunrise. The splendour seems to awake in us a realization of how splendid we can be. Your owl represents for me the blessing of inter-communication,of not being alone in an endless universe,under an infinite sky. |
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Hi Jayne, I like the imagery here. A great poem!  Poetess xx PS: I'm not usually so mad. I have a serious side too. |
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Hi Jayne, I truly love the visuals you portray! I am on the 7th floor so can see the sunrise and sunet from a perfect perch! |
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Welcome Jayne. I enjoyed this succinct work... bear |
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| | From:  Zydha | Sent: 2/7/2008 12:26 AM |
A great entry to the board, Jayne, welcome. I can see that I am going to like your work, very atmospheric, excellent wordskill, Zy |
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Gave the right feeling of evening for me. Could see the picture you are portraying.
Melody x |
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