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| | From: Jayne (Original Message) | Sent: 2/8/2008 2:11 PM |
The golden orb peeps shyly over the horizon Greeting the world. Lilacs, golds, pinks Suffuse the sky and streaks the waiting palette. Gathering strength, encouraged by its own power, The orb climbs higher. Light fills the heavens. And a new day has been born. |
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Uplifting thoughts you share, thank you for beautiful verse, Maria  |
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| From:  Zydha | Sent: 2/9/2008 1:23 AM |
Gaia and the elements of nature always touch me, Jayne, this is no exception, super wording, love this line particularly... 'Suffuse the sky and streaks the waiting palette.' Zy |
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I love the images here, Jayne. A wonderful "morning" poem. Thank you for sharing this. |
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That is my fav verse also Jayne. Thank you for this beautiful penning this morning. |
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