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New Poetry Pge 7 : Love makes you a fool
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From: MSN NicknameMindmanuk  (Original Message)Sent: 2/8/2008 2:38 PM
Love makes you a fool,
but experience makes you wise,
Love it has no rules
It's a roller coaster ride.
Love is like a summers day
Buried in the spring
Love is like a long lost friend
you want to usher in.
 
You say love's a losers game
But everytime you win
sure you lose as time goes on
but thats the funny thing
Love makes you an optimist
hurt makes you so strong
put that shield up wear those arms
till the next one comes along.
 
Love makes you a king or queen
Love makes you feel high
Love is like champagne at first
so drink it while your high.
Soon love becomes a cup of tea
a space where you fit in.
A worn out place on the settee
that is not ever thin
 
And one day you will find it gone
its fires were not stoked
you forgot that loves a fickle one
she just needs to be provoked
Love makes you a fool I guess
Experience makes you strong
I wonder which of them I am
and can I carry on.
 
8/2/2008


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From: MSN NicknamebunnsosoftSent: 2/8/2008 6:51 PM
Beautiful, but oh so sad Mark...Love is, many things, it also brings pain and suffering...be well and take care of you...
 
Maria

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From: MSN Nicknamesteve_riggsSent: 2/8/2008 7:03 PM
It is more of a fool who lets love pass them by without trying Mark.
Best Wishes, Steve

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From: MSN NicknameZydhaSent: 2/9/2008 1:26 AM
I like the various metaphors you use for the feelings of 'love', Mark,
 
and the weave together well throughout your lines here.
 
Not sure if they 'are' sad...or simply...reflective, Zy

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From: MSN NicknameVocalDixSent: 2/9/2008 2:16 PM
Even tho I lost the one I loved to liver failure last day of December and it tore me apart; I would not have wished to have never known him and experienced the real deal.  So sad Mark and hope you are ok.

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